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Below is the poem entitled Manifested which was written by poet Carmen Castro. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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That bottle of liqour putting you to the test  
Your inner demons starting to manifest  

Your no longer in control your bodies running a muck  
Straight evil in your veins not giving a f#ck  

That gaurdian angel gets muted out  
Your demons have it in a choke hold unable to shout  

It struggles and fights ,shouting out ,trying to scream  
But your mind is all warped like a nightmarish dream  

This is your manifestation your truly to blame  
Let them have there fun as they cascade you in shame  

They will dance and play, fill you up with desires  
They will beat on your spirit till it's weakened and tires  

Demons in a bottle and you swallowed them whole  
You've drowned out all reasoning now there in control

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:22:00 AM
    Waooooh! What a great poem, I like this so much, the description of little devil roaming in someone's head...... Alcohol will really be scared of this piece, I wonder.

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro
    Date: 9/26/2012 3:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Random thought. You ever hear someone say I blacked out?... I always wonder who takes over