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Man vs Fish

He breached,
 grabbed the floating morsel,
The battle began, 
Who will win
The deep blue sea
Or the frying pan
Taut muscles strain,
Thought i won this race,
He spits the hook back in my face.

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:57:00 PM
    Ha! Ha!...Great fisherman's story told..That was some more fish..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:14:00 PM
    Congratulations Carl... but it seems your fisherman should have washed his hands before baiting his hook. Fish are particular that way. YarnSpinner

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 2:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Carl xx

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 10:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in my contest.....Seren

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:20:00 PM
    Thank.. you... i know how it is to click on the block without knowing..... that is why I check frequently... I am so happy that it was not my comments... I was scared for a second... thank you..pd

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 11:20:00 PM lol.... I am imagining the scenario... man 0 fish 1... the thouhht is are good with your verses lingering to the image.. thank you for enjoying my poems... sometimes I think I write to much with metaphors. You got the right tools... hope the fish. Does not get away next time.... thank you... good night for now. LINDA...

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:13:00 AM
    Nice poem about the big one that got away. I live close to the ocean, but I don't like fishing.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:02:00 PM
    I have had this happen a few times. Can't really blame the fish. The good news is he will be bigger the next time you catch him. Fun Poem, now I want to go fishing.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 3:00:00 PM
    A very artistic lament for the one that got away! Liked this write =)