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Making Up Reality

Wild joy filled me, but I don't know why; perhaps it was the young woman I imagined, picking up discarded clothes in the bathroom with her skinny hands, her hair loose, falling over her eyes. She pulled the bathroom plug and cleaned the ring with a long-handled brush. She mumbled a song to herself and got up from her knees with a small grunt. She was wearing a bra that pinched a little on the left. I liked the way her eyes turned the colour of whisky when she looked into the light. Outside the door there was nothing; not even the vacuum of space – she hadn't imagined it yet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 1:42:00 AM
Hello Ciss G - I don't think a washing woman. The poem says: "The young woman I imagined". She is the embodiment of that elusive woman who does not actually exist, but with whom one always fall in love.
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Date: 12/4/2008 1:34:00 AM
hmm Are you talking about a washing woman?
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Date: 11/24/2008 8:46:00 PM
Another outstanding poem, De Waal! I'm intrigued by your style of poetry. Very imaginative. ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/22/2008 8:13:00 AM
Wow. This is so excellent and most interesting. Vivid imagery here. Especially love the ending and her eyes the color of whiskey. Love, Shar
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