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Make It Right

No wrong make a right
Live life pain and guilt free
You only have one



for two wrongs don't make it 
right contest

lifesenryu

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Date: 8/28/2010 3:56:00 PM

So much truth to your words. I haven't been keeping up with the contests--best wishes with this one. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2010 11:03:00 PM

No win on this one? It's great! Luv, Andrea

Sami Al-Khalili

Date: 8/20/2010 12:23:00 AM

Inspiring write and that's what I'm doing now! This is what all of us should see in life! Lovely write. Love, Sami.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2010 11:51:00 AM

Reads like a winner for sure..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2010 11:10:00 AM

How true! Very strong statement and I wish you success in the contest, Faleshia. Welcome back! So nice to see you online again. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2010 8:53:00 AM

OH Faleshia was thinking of u just yesterday dear friend.. how are u doing.. so happy to hear u will be souping every weekend now.. sounds like much improvement.. wonderful ..prayers produce miracles my friend..believe that.. a wonderful Senryu.. good luck int he contest.. I am in Italy .. getting married on the 22nd.. see some of my blogs from last week luv.. its so very exciting but OH what a long flight..luv.. happy Sunday.. keep in touch now..luv..

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