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Magical Days

As dawn arrives I sense the delightful morning sun rising over the land A taste of green tea and I'm ready to face my day as an ESL writing assistant The city glows almost super naturally and the metropolitan scene comes alive As I walk to work I sense the joys of urban life the masses of people off to work in this fantastic creation built with the sweat and blood of countless white and blue collar workers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/18/2014 10:15:00 PM
Great work, my friend.... I was so wrapped up in the realism of your imagery that I almost forgot I was retired. I was halfway down the stairs before I woke up.... Nice one to begin your posts.... Regards..... Jake
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem enjoyed this at morn today. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/21/2013 4:39:00 PM
nicely penned,, I've been off line for the past 2 1/2 weeks. Nice to be back reading good poetry ;} have a great day Matthew ;}
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Date: 5/12/2013 11:04:00 PM
There are just some days you feel so GREAT to be alive. I've never lived in the big city, but I've visited them before. They are magical in their own way, but I typically enjoy the smaller crowds. You have a talent for descriptions... your words easily put me into the scene and into your shoes.
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Date: 5/6/2013 10:18:00 AM
Very descriptive of city life as I have seen on TV since I live rural that is my only knowledge..Enjoyed reading this creative work..What is an ESL assistant?..Thanks for stopping by..Those mice that come into the house get a little surprise by a trap all set up to go off when they try to get the cheese..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2013 5:37:00 PM
Matt, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Date: 4/8/2013 6:13:00 PM
oh my gosh, you cleaned up your whole pages of poetry. Where have they all disappeared to??? No more lovely faves of yours in my favorites box any more.
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Date: 4/8/2013 12:19:00 PM
very nicely penned Matthew..liked it a lot ...love,Deb
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