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Magical Carpet Ride

Come fly with me to heaven's door On a magical carpet ride We'll explore the mighty universe Reach the mystical worlds on high We can only guess what secrets lie Beyond the heavenly spheres Another world like ours you say? We'll probably never know I fear Travelling through time and outer space Our minds are struck with awe Viewing our planet from worlds afar A shimmering blue and green ball Come fly with me above the stars And view nature's mighty plan Feel the vastness of the heavens above Put it all into place if you can © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 8/8/2014 11:57:00 AM
OH, OH! I think you just challenged Dragon. He thinks every one should fly Au La Dragon. He's decided to visit the Elf King, Because he wants his magic NOW!!! I doubt the Elfin King will let a 2 year old Dragon travel thru space and time... He's bad enough with all the trouble he makes here... 'The Universe' is NOT ready for Dragon ... yet... And will probably never be... Snicker! OOppps... Dragon heard that! Here we go again... Run! Thank goodness I've got good sneakers! And we're off!...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2014 8:24:00 AM
Your mind??? It's different... BUT lovable! You are unique my dear Carol! Sure like to meet you face to face one day! Loving hugs XOXOX
Date: 8/8/2014 7:15:00 AM
What an awesome write Jack ! I m ready to fly with u on that magical carpet Sir !
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/8/2014 7:43:00 AM
Again... I thank you for your kind words, dear Upma! Now climb aboard my magical carpet! Loving hugs, Jack XOX

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