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Magic Moonbeams

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Magic Moonbeams

On a perfect day in April as the Moon begins to rise
Past the echoes of the sunbeams that still tumble from your eyes
I am swallowed by the feeling that the World belongs to you
And each time you say you love me there is more I need to do

As the gold of sunset merges with the indigo of night
While the stars awake in splashes of their own eternal light
I can feel your gentle breathing as your arms are round my chest
Holding me inside a prison  under permanent arrest

As your fingers find their target and your lips begin to part
I am lost beyond rememb'ring in the beating of my heart
When you first said that you loved me there was such a Moon as this
And she brushed the sky with silver as you won me with your kiss

When you made your first surrender to the slightest of commands
And I learned the way you blossom as I feed you with demands
There were moonbeams filled with magic casting spells you must obey
And you swore you were my servant on the most momentous day

Now we're locked within the compass of the bright revolving spheres
I am yours each way you want me through the passing of the years
And the stars are now exploding into diamonds overhead
As I lead my bright-eyed lover from the garden into bed

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  1. Date: 2/22/2010 10:26:00 AM
    Many congratulations to you for your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 6:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Jeff. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 8:03:00 AM
    Sounds like love. Nice use of imagery and rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 8:19:00 PM
    What a nice sweet flow of anapaestic measure, and so sincere and unforced and wholly natural the expression. Fine, true poetry that is not free (from) verse. Thank you.

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 4:46:00 PM
    Boy are you in love LOL good for you! I liked your use of color imagery in this one! Remember we have many scenses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 12:35:00 PM
    Wonderfully expressed of feelings - very romantic stuff!

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 6:31:00 AM
    This one just made my favorites! A wonderful expression of eternal love mixed with the beauty and glory of nature. A very romantic and tender work of art. Absolutely beautiful. Smiles from Lolita