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Magic In the Melody

music live, transport infer..) from smiling keys; close as breath, to the listening & voluble air. Joe Maverick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2014 12:23:00 PM
good morning and happy easter, Joe. I was not trying to be feisty with that little ditty of mine. It was an entry for rhyme battle. but I never win with that judge and I just feel so discouraged because a lot of people told me they expected it to win. So I put it into PD's contest. we shall see!!!
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Date: 12/15/2012 11:10:00 AM
reading this magical little gem. thanks for your comment, Joe.
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Date: 5/8/2012 6:32:00 PM
Can't write a poem without music, I think the two go together just as you did with this one!
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Date: 6/4/2011 5:02:00 PM
Warmth in the tangent study of this instrument, Joe. Can sound so hauntingly beautiful. "smiling keys" ...do you play the piano, Joe? Hope you'll have a great weekend! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 4/20/2011 2:45:00 AM
An awesome description on the influence music has on us.. I quite enjoyed this write of yours Joe.. Thank you for the smiles you brought with your comment :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:27:00 AM
I love the way you describe the "smiling keys." The piano is my favorite instrument. Music does seem to transport us to a different state of mind. Thanks for visiting my work, Joe. I returned your Soup mail and am doing fine now. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:28:00 AM
Such a melodic description...lovely. Jod!e Q
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Date: 1/20/2011 10:50:00 AM
Well Done Joe My husband plays, I watch his ample fingers press against the ivory causing new melodies to fill the room with a great melodious ambiance of romance. Music is an internal gift Love Cookie
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Date: 1/13/2011 7:12:00 AM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..So glad that I stopped by..Your presence at my work was a delight,Sara
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:49:00 PM
This is a very nice and a unique portrayal of melody, Joe. I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:23:00 PM
Awesome one Joe and great title my friend.. melody is super important part of life..luv.. thankxxx for your comment on my Breath of Spring but it did not make the winners list this time..luv.. appreciate.. good luck to u my friend..
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