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Magic carpet

So you rode the magic carpet
And you sailed above the skies
You were taken by the beauty
You were blinded by the lies
As you soared up through the heavens
You could sense the angels sighs
They could see into your future
And they witnessed loves demise
Now you head towards disaster 
With no one to hear your cries
As you cling on to your memories
And the cold wind burns your eyes

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  1. Date: 1/27/2012 6:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:13:00 PM
    Congrats. on your super wins John, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:14:00 PM
    I really like this and what you are conveying with it, john. Congrats on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 2:18:00 PM
    Excellent imagination in this one..Good flow and rhythm..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win.Sara

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 12:34:00 PM
    And you have sailed along with the most beautiful words, to the top of the winner's circle!! Lovely poem! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 9:56:00 AM
    Really enjoyed this John Congratulations

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:13:00 AM
    Wonderful, congratulations on your win John. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest John W. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 10:54:00 AM
    Your works have such power... You can say a lot in a few words. That takes talent... and perhaps experience.

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 9:55:00 PM
    John,, not a ride i, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 4:41:00 PM
    it sounds like you're going through something sad, which i'm sorry to hear. i guess it's good to get it out in poetry, though. i hope it helped! you express yourself very beautifully........