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Maelstrom In this little hell world, with its thorns all unfurled, it seems we are all born to suffer, subtle as hell, fire burning so well, into the maelstrom we’re hurled., plum-duffer, ( bum soker…dumb fker} born stupid by chance, me brains didn’t dance, just too long out in the rain? the bloody hot heat, cooked me brain incomplete,, wonder if I'm bloody insane, but I cannot complain, bout brainless, de-brained, as a hell is so subtle, so neat, we notice it not, till I bloody forgot, that we all cop it sweet, a connection deletes, till, ole Quartpot’s doing his rain dance again. Don Johnson …

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  1. Date: 8/26/2013 10:48:00 PM
    ah..HA and Here's my lovely friend Bubby!!!!! I'm Back for a Bit! Thought I'd peek at your page and see how thee ole' pen is flowing. This verse made me giggle and smile alot... You have a way about you that I love so much. You are very much endeared by my heart. Take good care and God bless :) Baby Lu (Yeah Cindy, Lucinda.. whatever ;)