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Luna's Light - Constanza

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Luna's Light - Constanza

A cobalt sky with stars so bright 
    Like dancing diamonds in array 
    Scattered across the Milky Way. 

And Luna with her silver light 
    Caresses every hill and tree 
    and sprinkles lights across the sea. 

Engaged with clouds in misted sight. . . 
    As she shares her equinox sky, 
    enchanted clouds soon drift on by 

Spreading shadows with glowing light. 
    A couple strolls nearby the sea; 
    lovers in silent reverie. 

A peaceful calm is here tonight
    A floral scent so sweet and fair 
    denotes that spring is in the air, 

And all is good, and all is right. 
    With grateful hearts they share their love . . .
    while gazing at the stars above. 

A cobalt sky with stars so bright 
And Luna with her silver light 
Engaged with clouds in misted sight . . .
Spreading shadows with glowing light. 
A peaceful calm is here tonight
And all is good, and all is right. 

© 2012 Connie Marcum Wong

Dear Soup Members, I feel so honored that Andrea Dietrich is
using my 'Constanza' poetry form for her contest and I can't wait
to read the entries. I thought I woud post another example of a
Constanza I wrote  for your reference. Mahalo, Connie

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  1. Date: 7/6/2014 7:35:00 AM
    This is so good, I really enjoyed the form, an exceptional piece.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:34:00 PM
    You should rightfully win in the contest. After all, you invented this type of expression. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:46:00 PM
    A wonderful poem, Connie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:53:00 PM
    CONNIE, congratulations with your xool poem in Tracie's "SPRING" contest.. always :-) PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Spring Is In The Air" contest Connie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:28:00 PM
    Dear PS Members, I know my example poem for the Constanza has 6 stanzas plus the monorhyme but for Andrea's "Can you Constanza Contest" the limit is 5 stanzas with a sixth stanza being the monorhyme of the first lines of each stanza. I really look forward to helping Andrea judge this contest. Mahalo, Connie

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:01:00 PM
    Your poetry dances like ballerinas - I'm mesmerized. Thank you for introducing this poetry form to us (via Andrea). I have tried my hand at it (but not entering the contest). Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:52:00 AM
    It was a very enjoyable form to write in Connie! Glad to see you in the limelight :)Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 2:45:00 AM
    Beautiful Connie and I love this form xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Beautiful Connie, like a great meal satisfies this fills me with knowing there are still parts of this universe that survive man's intemperate use of what was once so pristine. This form is fascinating too and I think you have created a masterpiece my dear! :) Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:11:00 AM
    Oh boy my entry seems so feeble having read this , wonderful Connie, sheer delight.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 7:20:00 AM
    a precious gem of poetry Connie.. so enrapturing and enchanting.. best wishes ..Andrea will be mesmerized..I am doing so so .. my hands are giving me fits with arthritis.. cannot type.. Ron or my sons do it now .. some days more painful than others but I keep ticking like Energizer Bunny luv..need some of that lovely Hawaii weather to warm my bones .. hope u all r doing great. so happy to hear from u .. u made my day ..

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 3:28:00 PM
    Beautiful poem you have penned and I love the picture you have painted with your words. Thanks for your comments. I wish I had more time to be on the soup but with traveling and babysitting seems time run away from me. Love Phyl

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:09:00 AM
    What a wonderful and beautiful poem you have written here. Highly appreciate that you share it with so many, This is a poem that warms you right into the heart. Have a lovely new week. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 2:04:00 AM
    Good piece of writing, Connie. You carry off well the personification of the moon. A peaceful and calming read. Interesting form, but I have to admit it's a bit above my station. Enjoy the contest with Andrea. :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 12:17:00 AM
    This is amazing!!It's a delight to read your poem Connie.Enjoyed much.An excellent example of your own form!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:39:00 PM
    Dear Connie, thanks SO MUCH for posting this lovely new example here for the poets to see. I sure hope they will see it!! It's very beautiful. You had so many to choose from but the one I put at the contest page has always been very special to me. How many do you have? Also, I am happy to see you checked out my acrostic sonnet. Good night to you! Luv, Andrea