Notes About The Poem
There is a sleeping pill that by prescripton only called "Lunesta"..
It is addictive and causing sleepwalking in some people..It's effect is worse on older people..This song is a play off on that medicine..It is very dangerous when improperly taken..

Luna

Luna~~lu~nes~~ta~~luna
I am sooo in love with you
Each and ever~~y night


Sleepwalk, ~~all I do is sleepwalk
~~~

Lu~~nes~~ta~~luna~~luna
I am sooo in love with you
When I sleep~at night  

Every night, all alone with you in mind
Every night I'm dreaming of  you alone
Luna~~lu~~nest~~a~luna
As you float on by dreaming dear of you to night
Sleepwalk all I do is 
Sleepwalk
All I do is sleepwalk
Without you
I'm dreaming of you
I'm dreaming of you 
I'm dreaming of you
I'm loving you, loving you 
Luna, lu~~nest~~a~~luna
That blue pill 
I'm in love with you
I'm so in love with you 
I'm so in love with you

Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Contest: Sleepwalk
Chose Ventures as my music guide..
Finis October 21, 2012
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Date: 10/24/2012 11:18:00 AM
very nice pice here 4 1/2 stars hope to read more of your work soon
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Date: 10/21/2012 9:23:00 PM
Thanks for the info on this pill Sara..once when I was back home in Ja, I was going through some stuff and couldn't sleep, so the doc gave me something similar so I could sleep, the problem was though, my son came home from his after-school work and knock the doors and windows down and I didn't hear a thing, he had to sleep on the front porch, when I woke and realize what happened I toss the darn things down the toilet and that was the end of it. I know what you mean.they are not good!
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Date: 10/21/2012 10:50:00 AM
I love the moon and your poem too.
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Date: 10/21/2012 6:27:00 AM
lovely lyrical write indeed, my friend - I can't return Soupmail at the moment (System 500 error). congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 10/21/2012 3:09:00 AM
your lines make me sing...luna is a word i like -- so mysterious, romantic, sara.. will vome back to see it unravel... lovely..;) huggs!
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Date: 10/20/2012 11:23:00 PM
N A as L U as Luna - I love the moon and all of it's inherent mystery & beauty, so in my bias for Her I think this lyric is a delight Sara - I really like the sleep walk emphasis - and lu nes ta is so elegant - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/20/2012 4:11:00 PM
The love this moon you write about "sandy
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Date: 10/20/2012 1:40:00 PM
This must be a song!
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Date: 10/20/2012 1:05:00 PM
aweee.. Sara, now I'm in love with the moon... sweet....pd
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Date: 10/20/2012 11:05:00 AM
A beautiful poem in progress.....will come back.
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