Luna

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There is a sleeping pill that by prescripton only called "Lunesta"..
It is addictive and causing sleepwalking in some people..It's effect is worse on older people..This song is a play off on that medicine..It is very dangerous when improperly taken..

Luna~~lu~nes~~ta~~luna I am sooo in love with you Each and ever~~y night Sleepwalk, ~~all I do is sleepwalk ~~~ Lu~~nes~~ta~~luna~~luna I am sooo in love with you When I sleep~at night Every night, all alone with you in mind Every night I'm dreaming of you alone Luna~~lu~~nest~~a~luna As you float on by dreaming dear of you to night Sleepwalk all I do is Sleepwalk All I do is sleepwalk Without you I'm dreaming of you I'm dreaming of you I'm dreaming of you I'm loving you, loving you Luna, lu~~nest~~a~~luna That blue pill I'm in love with you I'm so in love with you I'm so in love with you Sponsor: Craig Cornish Contest: Sleepwalk Chose Ventures as my music guide.. Finis October 21, 2012 Click on " About This Poem"

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Rena Kiya

Date: 10/24/2012 11:18:00 AM

very nice pice here 4 1/2 stars hope to read more of your work soon

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/21/2012 9:23:00 PM

Thanks for the info on this pill Sara..once when I was back home in Ja, I was going through some stuff and couldn't sleep, so the doc gave me something similar so I could sleep, the problem was though, my son came home from his after-school work and knock the doors and windows down and I didn't hear a thing, he had to sleep on the front porch, when I woke and realize what happened I toss the darn things down the toilet and that was the end of it. I know what you mean.they are not good!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/21/2012 10:50:00 AM

I love the moon and your poem too.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/21/2012 6:27:00 AM

lovely lyrical write indeed, my friend - I can't return Soupmail at the moment (System 500 error). congrats on all your wins : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/21/2012 3:09:00 AM

your lines make me sing...luna is a word i like -- so mysterious, romantic, sara.. will vome back to see it unravel... lovely..;) huggs!

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/20/2012 11:23:00 PM

N A as L U as Luna - I love the moon and all of it's inherent mystery & beauty, so in my bias for Her I think this lyric is a delight Sara - I really like the sleep walk emphasis - and lu nes ta is so elegant - J.A.B. %