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Luminous Lace

light defines delicate fingers of frost luminous lace

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James Fraser

Date: 2/2/2011 1:22:00 PM

There's a wonderful beauty in this Deb, it's no surprise you won in the contest with it....:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/29/2011 10:31:00 AM

I really love how you describe it as "luminous lace" -- very creative and delicate indeed- adding this to faves :D -- nikko :)

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 1/26/2011 4:44:00 AM

this a beautiful haiku

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/25/2011 11:20:00 PM

You paint a pretty descriptive picture with so few words. Delightful.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 4:16:00 AM

Congratulations Deb, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 1/25/2011 3:35:00 AM

I see congratulations are in order here dear poet ! (((((claps))))) And such a visual one at that ! Great write ! much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:23:00 PM

wow, splendid imagery. just splendid! Congratulations, I remember this gem. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/24/2011 5:22:00 PM

lovely haiku Deb, congrats on your win in the contest

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2011 2:41:00 PM

sheer and lovely, my blog picture would go great with it! Congrad's LIght & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2011 10:22:00 AM

well-scribed, deb.. my best CHEES to you for a big wi in the contest! :) huggs, nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 9:40:00 AM

Way to go Deb, congratulations on #5, beautiful job. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:15:00 AM

You go, girl. Keep these great poems coming, Deb. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 8:50:00 AM

Hi Deb - - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/24/2011 8:21:00 AM

So glad to see this one in the winner's list! Hooray for you!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 6:42:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest ... awesome win luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2011 11:47:00 PM

This is beautiful!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 9:23:00 AM

Nice observation nicely put in words, deb

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/23/2011 8:28:00 AM

this is a beauty.....so unique!! Love the delicate nature of this one!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/23/2011 8:17:00 AM

Nice words expressed my dear Poet friend... luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2011 7:52:00 AM

Lovely and beautiful Haiku Deb.. glorious second line my friend and luminous lace shines bright this happy Sunday..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 6:49:00 AM

Good morning Deb, how are you... what a vivd image. Your haiku title is awesom.. sure enjoyed.. take care and have yourself a wonderful blessed Sunday,.(( soup mail))~.p.d.