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Irradiated in corner rooms; they talk in sun drenched whispers, Neath the sullen pines they lurk among the void Hope Less This varies, but they see the light shining down; touch forehead, look down. Assuage the lot of them fears, Pray More This varies, but they see the light of his crown; the absolute, the unknown Who knows a lot of their fears, Affliction Lit fire burns those left behind. Peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 10:18:00 AM
Thse single words between the lines are like exclamation marks and really underscore what you are saying Tim. I really enjoyed how you did this!
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Date: 4/30/2012 10:10:00 PM
this has an enchanting simplicity. The line breaks are interesting, and the tone beautifully consistent... way to go, tim!..:) huggs!
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Date: 4/30/2012 3:27:00 PM
This varies, but they see the light of his crown...Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2012 3:27:00 AM
Beautiful and powerful poem, enjoyed nicely. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/30/2012 1:22:00 AM
Hope, less, pray and peace ....all in one poem, well written Tim. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/30/2012 1:02:00 AM
Well written dear poet.My favorite line is the following:Assuage the lot of them fears,Pray More Superb !!!
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