Low Notes

when low notes resting
under score responses flat
arpeggio streams 

bass fiddles around
stanzas lost in the hum strum
tune up buddy or

fade to silenced
rhythms of verse play softly
with strings of attach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:29 AM
wow excellent words [duncan]
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Cool haiku based on music! Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 11:17 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Kristi. Love, Carol
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