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Loving you is hurting me

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Loving you is hurting me

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Being in love with you is hurting me
They say love kills but why does that have to be
Take full control of me mentally
It doesn't have to be but I feel that your safe with me 
Aint no place I'd rather be 
I hold on cuz I know one day soon you'll see 
but that doesn't take away from the fact
That loving you is hurting me..

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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:34:00 PM
    Very nice I like this it is so ture sometimes we wait and wait but they just dont get it keep loving just find someone who wants to love back honey cause love is not supose to hurt

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 11:14:00 PM
    well i like it. most of what i write is rhyme scheme, although lately its all been free verse for some reason... but well done!

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:05:00 PM
    I have many poems from my past like you do and when I read them and read yours it reminds me of how important it is to savor happiness. Much hugs always Michael

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    Date: 12/2/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Btw I rambled without telling you how much I enjoyed you work. xx Michael