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Loving Is

Loving ain't simple if it was... We wouldn't have the heartache and pain The stress and the strain A tongue we had to refrain And even after we say it, We feel so ashamed. Loving is a difficult thang! Constantly on your brain Hoping the other feels the same, And you're not down a one way street How you got there? Having to explain. Love is a beautiful picture, A vision outside your window pane So gentle, so tame A painting of a daydream, Captured in a frame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2012 10:19:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Corey. Love, Carol
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Corey Brown
Date: 1/25/2012 10:25:00 AM
Carol, Thank you. I myself have studied poetry and not have yet gotten the concept of all forms. I enjoy reading your work as well. All poetry can be classified as heart felt.
Date: 1/24/2012 6:40:00 PM
sometimes! good thinking here! Light & Love
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