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Loving Days

Change of selfish ways When will humanity have Loving truthful days

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Sue Mason

Date: 11/24/2008 10:50:00 AM

This is a keeper, for sure!! I've added it to my favorite poem list ... this needs to be sent to every ceo in the world ... LOL ... surely the great dilemma of our materialistic world!!

Deneen White

Date: 11/8/2008 5:05:00 PM

such a hope and wistfulness within, love this write, and it will happen in the not to distant future, take care D-nyce

Date: 11/3/2008 2:27:00 PM

Amen! So much truth shared in just three lines. What an insightful poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your encouragement regarding my writing. Blessings to you. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/3/2008 3:40:00 AM

I don't know my friend, but the reality of most is very upsetting and sad. Excellent write, love Kristin

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/3/2008 1:35:00 AM

Just beautiful, my dear friend, Mohammad :) And thank you so much for your reading& commenting so kindly about my poetry.I really appreciate it.Take care! Love and blessings! Dorian

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 11/2/2008 5:52:00 PM

This is the question of the century. I like your use of the rhetorical questioning technique to give an impacting spark to the poem. It flows very well and is intriguing. Great job! ~Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/2/2008 3:45:00 PM

That day will be a day when we will all rejoice in pure joy. Till then, we must question, as you do here so beautifully. Love, Shar

Lon Bruso

Date: 11/2/2008 1:50:00 PM

Beautiful sentiments! I hope this truly does happen!