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Love's Note's

********************************************************************************* Flames devouring her breast betwixt my fangs as she cried; blood, dripping unto the floor Quivering for more, as she squeezed her thighs to release the joy; craving piercing nails Carving this night whileas screaming at the moon; ravishing my flesh in euphoric crimsons... ********************************************************************************* ..."Loves Notes" *

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/5/2012 9:47:00 PM

Oh sarha,, how do I love thy words,, let me count the ways ;} I hope this day finds you happy and content,, my sweet friend ;}

Date: 1/19/2012 7:50:00 PM

‡ Owwww I'm Jealous ¥ She Makes Sooooo Wet ‡

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/5/2011 5:09:00 PM

Raw and ripping Sarah, you have a way of expressing emotions and these amazing things that haunt your imagination! And you have an amazing following of readers you entertain. How do you handle the traffic dear. Luv, LIzzie Hugs to you!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/5/2011 8:34:00 AM

Needless to say, this is very well written. God! Your so gifted in this writing style! Enjoyed this so much :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/30/2011 6:21:00 PM

You have a very unique way of writing of love and living. I enjoyed this write very much. Luv Michael

Brenda Barricklow

Date: 11/30/2011 3:48:00 PM

its amazing my dear =^_^=

Annabelle Jane

Date: 11/30/2011 10:07:00 AM

Sensual and delicious as always my Sarah... I think you'll like my new poem 'verging on unvirginal'... care to read it? It was partially inspired by your beautifully crafted passionate work. Love always, Annie x

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/29/2011 8:55:00 PM

Powerful and very visual!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/29/2011 6:46:00 PM

sounds painful....

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/29/2011 6:31:00 PM

Wow! Good writing Sarah! Reminds me of my favorite Dracula Film of the '70s, starring Frank Langella... fell in love with that Dracula : ) Scary good! Love, Annalise

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/29/2011 4:30:00 PM

Hi Sarah, I see your imagination is running riot here in this sexy shocking verse. Wild images to keep the mind in suspense and give some shivers too. You know how to do it my dear! Luv, Lizzie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/29/2011 1:59:00 AM

a vampire passion?? this is so exotically written, sarah... very descriptive all thorughout!. i am amazed how you can get as many as 300 views!!... when you have time, kindly comment on my poem called " DESPERATELY SEEKING", i do need your inputs.. hugggs and sweet thanks! :)

John Aaron Green

Date: 11/28/2011 9:01:00 PM

simply beautiful,,,,and very sexy....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 7:55:00 PM

hello Sarah, how are you? Stopping by my poems i see... a very lovely poem.. you have here. very gripping. and tasteful~.. thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/28/2011 1:47:00 PM

wow this is very good, glad I took the time to read your lovely pen.

Kash Poet

Date: 11/28/2011 8:34:00 AM

Euphoric!!