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Lover's Walk At Sunset

the flower strewn hills embrace the earth with garlands.... a bouquet of love a bent willow tree brushes against my earlobe... whisper of a kiss lover's palette sunset of crimson... is blood from mine own heart? _______________________________________________ Entry for PD's Contest: 2 Valentine Haiku/1 Questionku)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2013 8:54:00 PM

well, my prediction did not come true but for me, it's a topper!! Congrats, Carrie.

Joseph May

Date: 2/17/2013 12:42:00 PM

wonderful write and win...congrats

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/16/2013 11:20:00 PM

many congrats Carrie on your winning set of Haikus

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2013 1:58:00 PM

CARRIE, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

... Gigno

Date: 2/12/2013 7:53:00 PM

!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2013 5:30:00 AM

This is a very beautiful poem by you Carrie.Love the imagery here.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2013 2:45:00 PM

Ahhh!!So descriptive and expressive..Romantic work that you have penned..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2013 11:13:00 PM

wow, I expect to see these high on the list. You did exactly what the judge requested!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/4/2013 11:30:00 AM

Just beautiful.What can one expect from such a beautiful heart?

James Peranteau

Date: 2/2/2013 6:48:00 PM

Gave me the goose bumps wit this one dear poet ! Loved it ! Nice to read you again ! Have a wonderful weekend Carrie....much love, james

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/1/2013 8:20:00 PM

Very nice series..Enjoyed the read..BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/1/2013 8:00:00 PM

This is such a wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendously gorgeous poem this evening! What a powerful Haiku and questionku! Just a note, questionku is supposed to be 4/5/6 syllable count! Great Work!!

Carrie Richards
Date: 2/1/2013 8:24:00 PM

Thanks so much Russell!