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Lover's Walk At Sunset

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Lover's Walk At Sunset

the flower strewn hills 

embrace the earth with garlands....

a bouquet of love

a bent willow tree

brushes against my earlobe...

whisper of a kiss

 lover's palette 

sunset of crimson...

is blood from mine own heart?

Entry for PD's Contest: 2 Valentine Haiku/1 Questionku)

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  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:54:00 PM
    well, my prediction did not come true but for me, it's a topper!! Congrats, Carrie.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:42:00 PM
    wonderful write and win...congrats

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:20:00 PM
    many congrats Carrie on your winning set of Haikus

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:58:00 PM
    CARRIE, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 7:53:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 5:30:00 AM
    This is a very beautiful poem by you Carrie.Love the imagery here.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Ahhh!!So descriptive and expressive..Romantic work that you have penned..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:13:00 PM
    wow, I expect to see these high on the list. You did exactly what the judge requested!!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:30:00 AM
    Just beautiful.What can one expect from such a beautiful heart?

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Gave me the goose bumps wit this one dear poet ! Loved it ! Nice to read you again ! Have a wonderful weekend Carrie....much love, james

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 10:11:00 AM
    I have looooved reading the pieces for this contest- this one included, obviously! Amazing work, this is absolutely beautiful :) best of luck to you in the contest- although, I know you won't need it ;)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Very nice series..Enjoyed the read..BG

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Great images project with your penmanship, have a great weekend Carrie, xxx

    Richards Avatar Carrie Richards
    Date: 2/1/2013 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh yes......thanks for the kind reminder, Russell!
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:00:00 PM
    This is such a wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendously gorgeous poem this evening! What a powerful Haiku and questionku! Just a note, questionku is supposed to be 4/5/6 syllable count! Great Work!!

    Richards Avatar Carrie Richards
    Date: 2/1/2013 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Russell!