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Lovely

L ovely as a beautiful rose O nly you control my soul. V enon of love is in the air E verywhere is with you I want to be L onging for your love and time with me Y ou are the one for me and this is the way I want it to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/14/2012 12:08:00 PM
Nicely done Shirley. A really good acrostic. God bless, JB
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Date: 5/11/2012 9:06:00 PM
Enjoyed your poems today...Patrick
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:30:00 AM
Sounds like love to me. Enjoyed. daver
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Date: 5/4/2012 12:09:00 AM
(Sigh)Stupendous write dear Shirley ,love is strong to those who let it in the home, of their heart and it is evident that your heart is warm and sublime. Your precious charm flowing through your pen drew a loving picture in my heart tonight. I shall dream of your love...Elliott...xoxox
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Date: 5/3/2012 9:05:00 PM
Shirley, it is a very lovely thing when love controls all the emotions inside... it's the down fall that gets ugly. a very cute and lovely poem... I love the ending.. life should be the way we want it to be...i so agree with you.. I want to be with that special someone always.. thank you for stopping by my work..always...PD
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Date: 4/20/2012 3:31:00 PM
A touching acrostic poem very romantic.
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Date: 4/16/2012 4:31:00 PM
A very lovely poem with an romantic touch,Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:30:00 PM
beautiful and lovely, shirley
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:30:00 AM
Nice piece! Laila ;0)
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:21:00 AM
Lovely acrostic Shirley. Thanks for your recent visit. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:01:00 PM
It's soft and flowing... Left me smiling...Diana
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:18:00 AM
so nice to hear from u Shirley.. again enjoyed the loveliness of this lovely write .. happy weekendf luv..
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Date: 4/7/2012 9:52:00 PM
I am smiling, This poem is very candy sweet.
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:56:00 AM
lovely indeed, my friend
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:40:00 PM
lovely write Shirley...always.... Joseph
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Date: 3/30/2012 1:24:00 PM
very insightful reading, thanks for posting
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Date: 3/30/2012 9:47:00 AM
I love the second line. :) Thanks for stopping by, Shirley.
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Date: 3/28/2012 12:35:00 PM
excellent poetry. will miss ya dear poetess, left 1 standing..... :) when one door closes another opens ;)
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Date: 3/27/2012 1:49:00 PM
Shirly, I really like your acrostic and lovely it is.
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Date: 3/27/2012 1:44:00 PM
Very nicely done Acrostic. Filled with lots of emotion. Good job Shirley.
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:15:00 AM
Very nice and lovely way to describe the loveliest.
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Date: 3/24/2012 11:25:00 AM
This one flowed and worked out perfectly.
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Date: 3/23/2012 1:36:00 PM
oh this is awesome...really. Lovely words you've penned...keep on writin'!!!...:)
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Date: 3/20/2012 5:42:00 PM
What a wonderful acrostic poem, with such beautiful words.
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Date: 3/16/2012 1:29:00 AM
This truly lovely- a song of love, Brenda : )
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