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Below is the poem entitled Loved which was written by poet Twelve Noon. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I love you, did I tell you enough?
I know life has been very tough.

My heart belongs to you.. 
Back to that day I said I do...

Do we have a future together?
Or does it end now and forever?

I love you, these words are heartfelt.
I wanted you to know how I really felt.

I am glad that we are still united as one.
I want our lives and our love to carry on.

I love you, from my heart and my soul.
I want you in my arms to have and to hold.

Today you have to catch your plane.
Starting a new job I couldn't get it arranged.

I have a fear in my heart that it might crash.
Reassuring me, you say you'll be back in a flash.

That night, I got a knock at the front door.
I went numb at the news I heard forsure.

On my telephone, was your voice one last time.
"I love you"...and that ended the line.

On my knees, with my face in my hands.
I lost my only love I did not understand.

My life without my love is tormenting.
Everyday, every night and every morning.

I love you I hope to see you soon one day.
Hoping to have that chance I cry and I pray.

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  1. Date: 8/16/2009 6:32:00 PM
    You not only touched my heart, you made me cry. This is heartbreaking, Erin. Just tell me that it's a fictional piece. OH! I just see your comment on the bottom of this page...Good!! Don't do this again!! Terribly sad verse, the emotion comes, hit, and leaves the reader...crying in my case!!! : ) To my favs! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 10:51:00 AM
    Good afternoon Erin. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 4:18:00 AM
    Very beautiful, Erin, and you hit a personal note for me. One hour before my father's stroke he had left a voice mail for me. I can't erase it, and can't bring myself to listen to his voice "one last time." You touched my heart with this incredible write. God bless you. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 3:31:00 AM
    Nicely written random thoughts. Keep writing. Sara