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Love Will Triumph

he stood there his blank stare fell below raised brows as he tipped his hat towards his love the flame in his heart burnt brighter than the fire atop fresh logs the soft glow lingered yet it was no match for her father's temper that snapped and popped in disapproval in one hour they were to be married behind the stained glass a doorway lay hidden guests awaited down the hall the fresh aroma of roses cascading from her bouquet filled the air his bride sat there as if in mourning on what was to be her happiest day her ivory dress matched the tone of her skin as all color faded beneath the chill of her father's words her veil still in its box peered through as her mother sprang to her feet and tried to calm him her hands pressed firm against his heart as she whispered love will prevail in the distance the music began to play...

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Date: 10/5/2013 8:15:00 PM
Great description and similes here! The stained glass, the roses, the music... all a very ingenious take on the painting.
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Date: 10/2/2013 3:08:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this romantic yet bittersweet take on the theme :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 2:55:00 PM
A very heartfelt and romantic poem! Just beautiful! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments!
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:35:00 AM
A beautiful story is told in this enchanting poem! Terrific poem for the contest! Congratulations to you, Sandra!
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Date: 10/2/2013 12:02:00 AM
HMMM....The last two verses got me right there, simply amazing. Congratulations on the win Sandra
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Date: 10/1/2013 11:53:00 PM
Enchanting romantic piece and congratulations on being in the winner's circle Sandy.
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:11:00 PM
I just love it, I was drawn into the story. Well done, congratulations.
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:49:00 PM
WOW, I had not seen this one. How did I miss it? This is one of my top favorites in the contest. BIG congrats.
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:33:00 AM
EXTREMELY HEART TOUCHING BEAUTIFUL PIECE SANDRA
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Date: 9/23/2013 12:14:00 PM
A very romantic and beautifully written poem, Sandra! I think this represents the painting very nicely. Wonderful work! I wish you good luck in the contest!...Thank you for the kind comments. They are very much appreciated! :)
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Date: 9/22/2013 9:20:00 AM
Great write Sandra, really enjoyable read, such romantic hope showing itself in your write. well done, have blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 9/17/2013 6:21:00 PM
Hello Sandra, A very hearty romantic piece here. Exhibits your talent very clearly when it comes to passion. I can see this kind of love will come out on top.... Sweet surrender ending... xox~ Linda
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