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Love Under An Old Umbrella

abrupt intrusion.... tiny leak in umbrella christens a lover's kiss raindrops tittering in sync with coupled laughter... springtime happy dance
................................................... For PD's contest: Kissing in the Rain picture #7...#1

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Date: 6/1/2013 2:35:00 PM
You made the rain sound like a great time..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:12:00 AM
This sure is a delightful read that brought a smile to my face-- lovely and romantic! I enjoyed this sweet haiku, Carrie :)!
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Date: 5/29/2013 3:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:15:00 AM
One that should be at the top! congrats,Carrie.
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:30:00 PM
Happy haikus congratulations..
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:07:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:18:00 PM
Carrie. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA
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Date: 5/25/2013 2:16:00 PM
Carrie I love this delightful image in your Haiku. It sounds like a winner. Good luck. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:25:00 AM
Hi Carrie - How romantic. What a pretty poem. love, Kathy
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Date: 5/25/2013 9:47:00 AM
Especially love the first one - the face of those lovers as drops hit their faces. Love, daver
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Date: 5/25/2013 8:03:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku. A lot of emotion in a few lines.They make me want to grab my husband by the hand and run out into the rain.
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Date: 5/24/2013 8:28:00 PM
Carrie, these haiku are fabulous! I love the picture they portray. Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2013 7:38:00 PM
Oh this is sweet! :) Love these lines! Beautiful, Carrie! This should do very well indeed!
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