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love under an old umbrella

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love under an old umbrella

abrupt intrusion.... tiny leak in umbrella christens a lover's kiss raindrops tittering in sync with coupled laughter... springtime happy dance
................................................... For PD's contest: Kissing in the Rain picture #7...#1

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:35:00 PM
    You made the rain sound like a great time..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:12:00 AM
    This sure is a delightful read that brought a smile to my face-- lovely and romantic! I enjoyed this sweet haiku, Carrie :)!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. AO

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:15:00 AM
    One that should be at the top! congrats,Carrie.

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:30:00 PM
    Happy haikus congratulations..

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 2:07:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 7:18:00 PM
    Carrie. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:58:00 AM
    Came back to rate it. Thank you for a very beautiful poetic gift!

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:57:00 AM
    I feel like dancing and certainly smile, too. Happyyyy! :)

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Carrie I love this delightful image in your Haiku. It sounds like a winner. Good luck. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Hi Carrie - How romantic. What a pretty poem. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Especially love the first one - the face of those lovers as drops hit their faces. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Wonderful Haiku. A lot of emotion in a few lines.They make me want to grab my husband by the hand and run out into the rain.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Carrie, these haiku are fabulous! I love the picture they portray. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:38:00 PM
    Oh this is sweet! :) Love these lines! Beautiful, Carrie! This should do very well indeed!