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Love Rehashed

No simple four letter word can express when I'm in your arms I get dejavu Tidal waves of emotions, never stress I adore the very essence of you No simple four letter word can express Beneath my breast bone is your pretty face You fill this void princess with happiness Never alone because we're in this race No simple four letter word good enough My desire is fire and I'm too far gone To describe your body sculpted above I worship the very ground you walk on This yearning is continued without pause, Because we know that loving is the cause *For Sara Kendrick's "Sonnet Me" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 8:45:00 PM
This is the first of your poems I've read... and what a good choice. I feel it and know it. Nice!
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:25:00 PM
You've done a fine job here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2011 11:28:00 AM
Good to see your top 14 victory Jimmy. Congratulations on your worthy poem in 14th place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/13/2011 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine 14th Place win in Sara's "Sonnet Me" Contest! Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/13/2011 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations for your placement in the sonnet contest for this really lovely poem Jimmy..love,Deb
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Sara, Jimmy
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Jimmy in the contest "Sonnet Me" sponsored by Sara Kendrick. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:14:00 PM
A Sonnet in Jimmy Anderson Style. Absolutley brilliant and unique. Many congrats, Jimmy. Lainie
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:21:00 PM
Thanks for the wonderful entry in my contest..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2011 12:28:00 PM
The yearning is obvious. You two will be fine. Being apart is really tough. Beautiful! Best wishes for Sara's "Sonnet Me" Contest, JAM Love, Annalise p.s. Deb sent me your new address. Can't wait to hear what's up with the transfer. Take care. I'm in a hurry as usual!
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Date: 4/8/2011 1:13:00 PM
very beautiful...good luck in the contest Jimmy! love,Deb
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Date: 4/8/2011 12:12:00 PM
A sharp yearning for love , a nice sonnet with nice rhyming with iambic pentameter, Jimmy
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:15:00 AM
Magnificent Jimmy. I wish I could write a Sonnet. You make it look and sound so easy. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2011 10:26:00 AM
And what better reason could there be? You have the form down perfectly Jimmy. good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce
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