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Love paradox 1

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Love paradox 1

It  seems  pre-destined
That  my canoe should
 never  make it across
Your  river of  love
Getting always sucked in 
At the  vortex in its middle
Only to resurrect itself
As a triumphant memory
Or as a  likeable  defeat
Left floating all over you 
As clouds bearing the rains
That  sustain your flow
That should pour over you
But never to win over you
But ever wins you over.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

For PD's 'Any romantic poem' contest on 28 May 13

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Jag, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Congratulations on your H M in P D's contest..'

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Jag, CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:29:00 AM
    Brilliantly written....CONGRATS on your win!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Jag, congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:02:00 AM
    Jag, I truly struggled with justifying the act of taking the poetry of others, and separating it into placements. I read this strong poem several times in a row. Thank you for supporting my contest!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:34:00 PM
    a very cool poem, Jag. Glad to see you in the winners' circle with it. I really enjoyed the read. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Jag, I absolutely love this, you made me smile with this one :) congratulations on your win!!

    Nair Avatar S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 6/20/2012 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u Wilma..:) Jag
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:43:00 AM
    Ahh-- I totally enjoyed this one, jag! I definitely like your metaphors here and how you ended this was wonderful-- makes my head go round and round! Super congrats on your win :D

    Nair Avatar S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 6/20/2012 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u, Nikko...:) Jag
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win!

    Nair Avatar S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 6/20/2012 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thnx, Drunken Poet...:) Jag
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:03:00 AM
    Beautiful poem! Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Chris' "A.gain" contest Jag. Love, Carol

    Nair Avatar S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 6/20/2012 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thnx, Carol..Jag
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 3:12:00 AM
    Jag, my dear friend...Hope you had a great day...I knew I liked this poem for a reason and it doesn't surprise me that Chris liked it too! A hearty congratulations on this poem that just floated thru your pen! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 5:39:00 AM
    Dang, Jag! I really like this one almost as much as I like the one you wrote today...The analogy of a canoe in the river and the vortex at the middle...(we call them "sink holes" here...they can be mighty dangerous takin' one's life!) At the conclusion you have resolved yourself in this paradox which is so intense. You stirred my heart again with this one...hard to explain it tho'. Enjoyed this immensely..another fav! :) Come visit my Ground Hog Blog.

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 10:46:00 AM
    So true....well written Jag. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 10:29:00 AM
    an arresting piece that pulls me in, bl... splendid pen!..:) huggs