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Love Paradox 1

It seems pre-destined That my canoe should never make it across Your river of love Getting always sucked in At the vortex in its middle Only to resurrect itself As a triumphant memory Or as a likeable defeat Left floating all over you As clouds bearing the rains That sustain your flow That should pour over you But never to win over you But ever wins you over. S.Jagathsimhan Nair For PD's 'Any romantic poem' contest on 28 May 13

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Skat A

Date: 6/1/2013 2:40:00 PM

Jag, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/1/2013 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your H M in P D's contest..'

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 10:24:00 AM

Jag, CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD

David Williams

Date: 6/21/2012 3:58:00 PM

Jag, congrats on your win...David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2012 9:34:00 PM

a very cool poem, Jag. Glad to see you in the winners' circle with it. I really enjoyed the read. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/20/2012 12:28:00 PM

Jag, I absolutely love this, you made me smile with this one :) congratulations on your win!!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 6/20/2012 5:48:00 PM

Thank u Wilma..:) Jag

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/20/2012 10:43:00 AM

Ahh-- I totally enjoyed this one, jag! I definitely like your metaphors here and how you ended this was wonderful-- makes my head go round and round! Super congrats on your win :D

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 6/20/2012 5:49:00 PM

Thank u, Nikko...:) Jag

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/20/2012 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 6/20/2012 5:50:00 PM

Thnx, Drunken Poet...:) Jag

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/20/2012 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Chris' "A.gain" contest Jag. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 6/20/2012 5:52:00 PM

Thnx, Carol..Jag

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/20/2012 3:12:00 AM

Jag, my dear friend...Hope you had a great day...I knew I liked this poem for a reason and it doesn't surprise me that Chris liked it too! A hearty congratulations on this poem that just floated thru your pen! Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/19/2012 5:39:00 AM

Dang, Jag! I really like this one almost as much as I like the one you wrote today...The analogy of a canoe in the river and the vortex at the middle...(we call them "sink holes" here...they can be mighty dangerous takin' one's life!) At the conclusion you have resolved yourself in this paradox which is so intense. You stirred my heart again with this one...hard to explain it tho'. Enjoyed this immensely..another fav! :) Come visit my Ground Hog Blog.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2012 10:46:00 AM

So true....well written Jag. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2012 10:29:00 AM

an arresting piece that pulls me in, bl... splendid pen!..:) huggs