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Love Lost

We've only just begun
a life combined as one
a life of love ahead
together we shall spread
our love to all we meet
and shout it from the street

What is this you say?
No, not one more day?
This cannot be true
what they say of you,
surely it's a lie

There is no cure
are you for sure?
I cannot bear
it is not fair

Quite the plight
eyes a fright
no more fight

just one
thing left


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  1. Date: 6/23/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Powerful emotions captured! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:22:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot a sad one xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:56:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Wow, a powerful write of true love. The ending was unexpected and so sad. You have brought tears to my eyes. Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:16:00 PM
    What a roller coaster of emotions in this winning dimi hexi...I loved the flow and powerful abrupt stop at the end....Congrats, gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Trudy~xox~ a wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day (: PD

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:50:00 AM
    Trudy, I really felt your words in this poem, was this about your dad? thanks for entering and well done...David

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    Date: 6/22/2012 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is actually about my husband, he's been diagnosed with an incurable lung disease, although there may be more time with medications and such, we have a long road ahead of us....hopefully VERY long ... but...yeah, it's not easy living with the diagnosis.
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:48:00 AM
    wow, it went right down to DEATH. What a way to do this form, Trudy. Big congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:43:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning poem!!!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:16:00 AM
    Powerful write that and many congratulations with the win!