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Love Can Be

Love can be looked at, as an abstract and can seem like an artifact, encased in a crusted bundle, buried somewhere deep waiting to be discovered Love is found and excavated, gently brushing the ruminants away trying not disturb the true essence that was neatly preserved Now, Love can be displayed, so people can see that even though it can be still, It can always be real If only you can believe that love can be, indeed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/22/2012 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Maxeen. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:45:00 AM
Yes! To hell with love. Feed me! Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:36:00 AM
Maxeen, Congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week..........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/7/2012 3:22:00 PM
you have some of the basic rudiments of good poetry but need to sharpen your skills. look at the word look in the first line. whats wrong with it. lesson number one proof read every line before you post them. some poets stop reading because of misstakes.
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Maxeen Dennis
Date: 2/7/2012 7:23:00 PM
Thank you very much! you know I have read it over many times and didn't catch the mistake.
Date: 1/30/2012 5:04:00 AM
Lovely poem wrtitten Maxeen....oxox love Anne-Lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/30/2012 5:04:00 AM
written....sorry!!! :)

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