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Love Birds

Birds that hum in two
Clothed in dyed colour and hue
Spit a kiss then  coo

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  1. Date: 11/20/2009 1:53:00 PM
    well..very different! can birds spit? Light & Love (it made me smile!)

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 1:12:00 PM
    good one, but where have u disappeared my bro?

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 8:12:00 PM
    "Beauti-amazing-ful" Haiku, Gino!!! Congratulations! Its flow, its rhyme, the choice of words!! excellent. Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/4/2009 9:53:00 PM
    Superb rhyming and flow... a charming HAIKU my friend! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 9/18/2008 2:38:00 PM
    I like your rhyming sequence. This is an excellent piece and it flows very well. I can see the images of the love birds quite clearly. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 8/5/2008 7:00:00 PM
    Lovely haiku--naturistic and picturesque. Thanks for the comment on mine. Regards, Sara:)

  1. Date: 7/31/2008 11:09:00 PM
    another great poem

  1. Date: 7/20/2008 7:55:00 PM
    and by the way it's the Ateneo in Manila. Just erase this comment, thanks!

  1. Date: 7/20/2008 7:42:00 PM
    Sure sounds like you're stalking me, hehehe. Yup, Ateneo, graduated last year. And was it a C? hahaha. What subject was it, bet it was project management, or networking. And yes, I do have a Friendster account, I just don't use my name, and no workshops for me. Feel free to erase this comment (this is getting a lot like ym to me...). Are there any other questions you'd like to ask, inspector? I'd give you my email, but I can't post it here. Cheers!

  1. Date: 7/18/2008 3:40:00 AM
    Haven't tried out the haiku yet,but this one's really well made. Not a word is out of place. And by the way, 22,manila.

  1. Date: 7/17/2008 3:27:00 PM
    That's a wonderful Haiku...You captured it perfectly... Always, Farah

  1. Date: 7/16/2008 4:41:00 AM
    This is written in perfect form and the flow and words zbring the imagery to life for the reader making for a wonderful read. Michael

  1. Date: 7/13/2008 12:46:00 AM
    You capture the image so well Gino.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 7/11/2008 7:36:00 AM
    this is one of my favorite haikus. very nice write with good imagery. i liked it very much. -Kristina

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 2:27:00 PM
    Thaks for the comment of my poetry GiNo. You have a gift I do not, haiku. I have tried but thet just dn't feel right to me. A very beatiful poem. My best, Charlie

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 7:08:00 AM
    I loved this Haiku - outstanding use of this form

  1. Date: 7/8/2008 6:23:00 PM
    Thank you for allowing me to smile with this poem. Nice use of this short format. I just found out that The Soup was up today. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Have a good day! Karen

  1. Date: 7/7/2008 5:23:00 AM
    Yes, their color is brilliant. A perfectly clear vision in this well done haiku. If I didn't have cats, I might just have a pair myself. They are so beautiful. Love, Shar