Love Beneath Autumn Sky

We lay beneath autumn trees
And autumn leave gently falls.
Laying beside you I'm lost in your eyes,
I'm lost in the presence of you
And autumn leaves gently falls.

We lay there and autumn breeze blow.
Would I trade this moment, no, no.
The rose in your hair is white like winter snow,
beauty lies before my eyes and sparkles glow,
And autumn breeze gently blow.

We lay beneath autumn trees,
We lay in love of autumn breeze.
We lay together in each other eyes,
We lay beneath the season of autumn sky.

Autumn breeze blow and leaves of autumn trees fell,
Staring in your eyes I see the unspoken love for me it tells. 
Autumn leave, red, brown, yellow,
in autumn wind they rattle a love symphony of being hallow.

Small rays of sunlight,
between autumn trees had you glow.
And as we lay together beneath autumn trees,
softly in our love we watch a autumn day goes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/21/2024 5:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/23/2016 10:06:00 PM
stephen montique, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:22:00 AM
STEPHEN, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2012 6:26:00 PM
wonderful write Stephen,welcome to the Soup,happy when I see other Jamaicans lol,put a little Jamaican spice in the Soup lol
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Date: 11/7/2012 6:16:00 PM
thanks much guys
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Date: 11/4/2012 7:03:00 AM
A very good imagery, Stephen. :) thanks for stopping by on my page.
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Date: 11/2/2012 2:00:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Stephen. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2012 1:31:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today I have enjoyed reading it. Have a great weekend Stephen. Love, Carol
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