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Love at first sight

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Love at first sight


A silhouetted lengthen form,
Came from out the morning sun.
As my eyes adjust to its savage glare,
I knew you are the one.

Though mortal in my quest am I
Fair maid I love thee so.
Smitten as the moth to the flame,
A pure vision to behold.

In trepidation of things to come,
Free from my lonely cell.
Heart beats like fluttering butterflies,
As from her lips, she chants her spell.

For I am but a simple fool,
And what can she see in me?
For that, what can I offer?
Except selfless love and loyalty.

For it is said love conquers all,
And for me I’m but a boy.
For what do I know of true love?
But in these words I try.

Nicholas Windle 2009.

Copyright © nicholas windle

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  1. Date: 6/6/2015 2:48:00 PM
    Hi Nicholas: Iam smitten by your words of love . Congrats on being featured on the home page.

  1. Date: 6/5/2015 5:02:00 PM
    Nicholas, congrats on having your poem featured on Soup's home page this week! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/5/2015 11:23:00 AM
    So beautiful!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2015 2:01:00 AM
    Hi NICHOLAS.. Just a quick note to congratulate you for having this impressive write featured on Soup's home page. Blessings and keep writing wonderful works! -LM

  1. Date: 6/5/2015 1:39:00 AM
    Great write!

  1. Date: 6/3/2015 7:42:00 AM
    Beautiful.....

  1. Date: 6/2/2015 11:16:00 PM
    nICOLAS, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 1:50:00 AM
    this is a lovely poem! it really speaks and i know someone who this could absolutely realte to...this is a great write...Keep Going!! Ciara=)

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 8:39:00 AM
    aww how sweet, love is a wonderful gift from God, some do not believe in love at first sight, it worked for me and my husband, we got married just 4 months after we met, one look we were smitten LOL, God bless you from diane