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Love Eternal

To my one and only Love  ---    BARBARA JEAN
Entwined Together You and   ---           I
In a Heavenly Eternity of    ----         LOVE
My Heart Evermore Beats for   ----     YOU
Embraces Your Heart; In Love  ---  ALWAYS
Everlasting Love, for Eons of   ---   FOREVER 

Inspired by Mac McGovern’s Contest “ Anything Goes Again “
Dedicated to Poetess Barbara Jean Gorlick With all my Love

Author’s Note : This POEM is an Example of a New Form of
POETRY Dane-Ann and I are trying to sanction
We call it “ End Line Word “ Poetry Thank-YOU

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Noel Villarosa Date: 2/20/2010 10:26:00 PM Wow, is all I can say with this, HGarvey. You and Dane-Ann are really a great contributor in poetrysoup, give me some of your brilliant mind. Always appreciate your kind words to my End Line Word poem. (^_^) Noel. Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 2/16/2010 1:29:00 PM well done and beautiful words Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 2/11/2010 3:00:00 PM Hi HG. Be sure to enter the End Line Word member poetry contest. (soup mail) Lovingly, Dane Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 2/8/2010 10:11:00 PM Beautiful. Your line:i will always love you forever. are always so deep! -Always Lynette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/7/2010 7:41:00 AM SOUP MAIL REPLY ..HG "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/6/2010 8:09:00 PM U are too kind HG and your compliments tonight have made me smile during this blizzard of snow that has fallen today... I will try to do more End Line Poems .. do u want me to do a blog so other poets can give this form a try?? glad u like them all and the Valentine poem was a specialty.. the door is always open to u should u want to do a collaboration with me.. it was be both an honor and a pleasure... thankxxx for my laurette crown.. I graciously accept as long as u do the crowning.. luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/6/2010 3:58:00 PM You've got the line and you are using it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/6/2010 9:51:00 AM OK HG I posted three new end line poems for u to view and comment on to see if I did justice to this new form ... let me know if I succeeded ...thankxxx to my dear silent beau... ALWAYS... luv.. blessings... more luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/6/2010 8:03:00 AM Am reading and writing at the same time the End Line Poetry suggested by u... read Marty's .. off to Doris now... hopefully will have one done before the snow covers the entire house..... haha... luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 2/5/2010 11:27:00 PM Yes I do love this form and love this poem and tribute that you have written. It's beautiful...I have started working on one but haven't quite completed it yet. I will let you know when it's finished...Marty Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/5/2010 8:59:00 PM well, gosh, how did I miss this one? I take it you won with this one? Congratulations, HG!! This is a really cool looking form , this end line word form! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Colleen Bono Date: 2/5/2010 6:09:00 PM This is really cool.I think it will be a hit for writers.Nice dedication to Barbara.She deserves it.Very nice person.Hope you have a great evening. Login to Reply

Date: 2/5/2010 12:40:00 PM This is really an interesting form you and Dane came up with. I printed out Dane's instructions and hope to get some time this weekend to try one. What an uplifting view. Nice dedication to Barbara Jean. Congratulations on placing fifth in Mac's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/5/2010 4:21:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest HG. Love,Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/4/2010 6:18:00 PM SOUP MAIL.. BEAU .. Login to Reply

Jeralynn Clark Date: 2/4/2010 5:03:00 PM What a great tribute!!! Congratulations Jeralynn Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 2/4/2010 5:03:00 PM Congratulations on your new form of poetry and your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/4/2010 4:07:00 PM Congrats HG on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. a wonderful new form and a wonderful write for a wonderful win.. thankxx for your loving comments of both congrats and luv ..on my first place win.. u are my special secret beau always... luv.. Linda-Marie Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 2/4/2010 3:41:00 PM Congratulations HG. Well deserved win.-Robert Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/3/2010 12:16:00 PM enjoyed reading today, nice love poem for your sweet heart, Barbara. Hope the form of poetry takes off. it is challenging and fun, I am going to try it. thanks!! Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 2/3/2010 7:54:00 AM Nice End Line Word poem, HG. I sure do hope our form takes off well. I know that I, like you, really have fun writing them. It feels like a word puzzle without a limit on words!!! Thanks for your comments on my poetry. (Soupmail with something to pass around.) Smiles! Love you, dear poet friend! Dane Ann Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/3/2010 6:18:00 AM Beautiful love poem HG for your special lady... this form is catchy and challenging ..must give it a try... thankxxx for your special and loving comments on my poetry too..luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/3/2010 5:22:00 AM Write on HG my forever friend. I wish you the best in Mac's contest. Love the way this form looks and love the two reads in one with it. Love, Carol Login to Reply