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Love Eternal

To my one and only Love --- BARBARA JEAN Entwined Together You and --- I In a Heavenly Eternity of ---- LOVE My Heart Evermore Beats for ---- YOU Embraces Your Heart; In Love --- ALWAYS Everlasting Love, for Eons of --- FOREVER Inspired by Mac McGovern’s Contest “ Anything Goes Again “ Dedicated to Poetess Barbara Jean Gorlick With all my Love Author’s Note : This POEM is an Example of a New Form of POETRY Dane-Ann and I are trying to sanction We call it “ End Line Word “ Poetry Thank-YOU

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Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/20/2010 10:26:00 PM

Wow, is all I can say with this, HGarvey. You and Dane-Ann are really a great contributor in poetrysoup, give me some of your brilliant mind. Always appreciate your kind words to my End Line Word poem. (^_^) Noel.

Susan Palli

Date: 2/16/2010 1:29:00 PM

well done and beautiful words

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/11/2010 3:00:00 PM

Hi HG. Be sure to enter the End Line Word member poetry contest. (soup mail) Lovingly, Dane

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/8/2010 10:11:00 PM

Beautiful. Your line:i will always love you forever. are always so deep! -Always Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2010 7:41:00 AM

SOUP MAIL REPLY ..HG "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2010 8:09:00 PM

U are too kind HG and your compliments tonight have made me smile during this blizzard of snow that has fallen today... I will try to do more End Line Poems .. do u want me to do a blog so other poets can give this form a try?? glad u like them all and the Valentine poem was a specialty.. the door is always open to u should u want to do a collaboration with me.. it was be both an honor and a pleasure... thankxxx for my laurette crown.. I graciously accept as long as u do the crowning.. luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2010 3:58:00 PM

You've got the line and you are using it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2010 9:51:00 AM

OK HG I posted three new end line poems for u to view and comment on to see if I did justice to this new form ... let me know if I succeeded ...thankxxx to my dear silent beau... ALWAYS... luv.. blessings... more luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2010 8:03:00 AM

Am reading and writing at the same time the End Line Poetry suggested by u... read Marty's .. off to Doris now... hopefully will have one done before the snow covers the entire house..... haha... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Marty Owens

Date: 2/5/2010 11:27:00 PM

Yes I do love this form and love this poem and tribute that you have written. It's beautiful...I have started working on one but haven't quite completed it yet. I will let you know when it's finished...Marty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2010 8:59:00 PM

well, gosh, how did I miss this one? I take it you won with this one? Congratulations, HG!! This is a really cool looking form , this end line word form! Luv, Andrea

Colleen Bono

Date: 2/5/2010 6:09:00 PM

This is really cool.I think it will be a hit for writers.Nice dedication to Barbara.She deserves it.Very nice person.Hope you have a great evening.

Date: 2/5/2010 12:40:00 PM

This is really an interesting form you and Dane came up with. I printed out Dane's instructions and hope to get some time this weekend to try one. What an uplifting view. Nice dedication to Barbara Jean. Congratulations on placing fifth in Mac's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/5/2010 4:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest HG. Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2010 6:18:00 PM

SOUP MAIL.. BEAU ..

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 2/4/2010 5:03:00 PM

What a great tribute!!! Congratulations Jeralynn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/4/2010 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your new form of poetry and your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2010 4:07:00 PM

Congrats HG on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. a wonderful new form and a wonderful write for a wonderful win.. thankxx for your loving comments of both congrats and luv ..on my first place win.. u are my special secret beau always... luv.. Linda-Marie

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/4/2010 3:41:00 PM

Congratulations HG. Well deserved win.-Robert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/3/2010 12:16:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, nice love poem for your sweet heart, Barbara. Hope the form of poetry takes off. it is challenging and fun, I am going to try it. thanks!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/3/2010 7:54:00 AM

Nice End Line Word poem, HG. I sure do hope our form takes off well. I know that I, like you, really have fun writing them. It feels like a word puzzle without a limit on words!!! Thanks for your comments on my poetry. (Soupmail with something to pass around.) Smiles! Love you, dear poet friend! Dane Ann

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2010 6:18:00 AM

Beautiful love poem HG for your special lady... this form is catchy and challenging ..must give it a try... thankxxx for your special and loving comments on my poetry too..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/3/2010 5:22:00 AM

Write on HG my forever friend. I wish you the best in Mac's contest. Love the way this form looks and love the two reads in one with it. Love, Carol