Love

Love is like the biggest wave in the ocean So beautiful and so strong Yet when it goes away, there's nothing you can do Excet hope that another one comes along

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:03:00 PM

that is sure cute! Congrats on your win.

John Serpa
Date: 8/29/2014 6:00:00 AM

thanks!!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/27/2014 9:24:00 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Excellent write! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:34:00 AM

Nice undercurrent of humor, john

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2014 5:32:00 AM

Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 5:14:00 AM

many congrats on you win with this lovely poem:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:46:00 PM

John, here I am once again.. :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/15/2014 3:39:00 PM

Cute!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 9:39:00 PM

John, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

Hani Gholami

Date: 8/7/2014 12:17:00 AM

Beautiful, Mine wave just came. please me read my latest poem, i hope you enjoy it, welcome.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2014 7:35:00 PM

John,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2014 3:55:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, John :) - I choose your first well written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)