Love

Love is like a fire It often expires A comfort that revives Your tender soul alive. A blind joy soaring The loveless signs ignoring It rises high with freedom's grace To spring a blush upon your face. Love is sweet like antique wine It breaks the fetters of loveless mind. Love is loving all the time Love is a spirit unconfined. Love is a constant kindness A joyful untamed madness. Love jealous not Or is a selfish glut. Love is a divine quality Expressed in purity!

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Pratidhwani Biswal

Date: 10/27/2017 2:14:00 PM

"Love is a spirit unconfined..." great words... Beautiful poem...

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/23/2013 12:08:00 PM

I agree, love should never be expressed falsely. Only whole-heartedly and with honest truthfulness. Which is something that most people forget to think about when they decide to love someone...Very beautiful words that you have written in this poem, Mustapha, I enjoyed it immensely!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/29/2013 9:37:00 AM

OH PAL LOVE IS EVERYTHING THAT ONE CAN OFFER THE GREATEST TREASURE KNOW A BEAUTIFUL PIECE YOU DREW MY OLD PAL TALK SOON

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 8/21/2013 4:21:00 PM

O` this is great. But greater still is what love is,........GOD!

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/6/2013 2:36:00 AM

Eloquent, tender & pure...your words are spiritual magical & a uplifting joy to read....Cherie€>

Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/6/2013 2:38:00 AM

This is my second go lol I'm fav this one M....thanks:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/5/2013 10:52:00 PM

Pure, unconditional love! Beautifully written, Mustapha! Thank you for sharing your incredible poems with us. Love them! annalise

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/30/2013 6:23:00 PM

Very cool and softly written with a romantic air about it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2013 12:08:00 AM

So poetic. This one sings!!

Sue Stahl

Date: 7/28/2013 3:08:00 PM

Loved this. Thanks for the comment.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/28/2013 2:45:00 PM

'A joyful untamed madness' and 'sweet like antique wine'...Terrific contrast!...Nothing describes it better - Tim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/28/2013 12:31:00 PM

this remarkable write celbrates all the aspects of love through lines that mystify... exquisuitely done, mus!..:)

Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/28/2013 12:02:00 PM

Nicely done word imergy outstanding loved it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2013 9:29:00 AM

yes, love it burns.... Love the expression in your words and heart... hope you enjoy my soup mail...LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 11:22:00 PM

Love is beautiful, like this poem!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2013 2:40:00 PM

Purity is the key..Enjoyed reading your expressive and creative work this afternoon..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/26/2013 2:33:00 PM

well expressed in a most detailed manner.. ohh,, love can open the muse'sgates!... splendid!..:)

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 7/26/2013 11:18:00 AM

Congratulation you are in true Love. Blessings for your love Love without jealousy, without selfishness is a Jewel if one could acquire. Nice poem. I enjoyed this. Thanks for your comments very encouraging

Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/26/2013 8:12:00 AM

I love each line M....you so get it!!!!! Thankyou for sharing my true friend....~<3 cherie

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/1/2013 6:30:00 AM

Thank you my dear.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/26/2013 5:05:00 AM

This is absolutely fantastic. :) My favorite lines, Mustapha? Love is sweet like antique wine It breaks the fetters of loveless mind. Love is loving all the time Love is a spirit unconfined. You have a lover's soul! :) Thanks for your visit!

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/1/2013 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Eileen. Its nice to hear from you.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/26/2013 4:11:00 AM

magical dearest M.M you write so well of love simply beautiful love Shadow x smiles xox

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/30/2013 6:48:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend.I'm so glad you liked it.I just know you would.