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Below is the poem entitled Love which was written by poet Benjamin David. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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He looked at her like a blind man seeing the sun for the first time and instinctively he knew that he loved her far more than anything else on this earth and far beyond anything in the sky. He never knew that beauty captivated the body in order to obtain permission to flicker its light unto the soul. He said unto himself: "When the feeling for beauty happens to be associated with the sight of some human being, the transference of love is made possible" and he smiled.

"It is all the beauty of the world" he exclaimed, "it is universal beauty, for which we all long". As he glanced at her ever long and bade her a smile like no other, she took his hand and filled the spaces between her fingers with his, and they both smiled when she realised that their hands were perfectly matched and divinely foretold in the stars. At that moment he knew that the heart and the seed remind us that the art of falling leads to something astoundingly beautiful. To love for the sake of being loved is rather human, but to love for the sake of loving is something altogether rapturous.

He peered within this new sunset and he comprehended all the secrets of the universe in his new found love. He realised that romance is a thing of beauty and she is love's perfect accompaniment. He no longer needed to call unto the heavens for love when he realised that her heart shared precious parallels with the shimmer; mother nature’s dance with the stream. 

He looked into her eyes and saw all the universe's dreams sweetly glistening back at him and he said unto her: "As men, we are told that to make women fall in love with us we must make them laugh, but every time you laugh I fall in love with you all over again"

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 10:13:00 AM
    wow, Benjamin, looking at the world after opening the eyes for the first time. I am smiling at you right now, you made the sound of falling in love so easy... you are awesome, I want to come back and read all your poems, after work*luv ~ SKAT ~

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for all your comments, I cannot quite convey to you how many smiles you have bequeathed me, you are truly heavenly.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 4:43:00 AM
    - Wooow, beautiful love story in your poem Benjamin. - Love is beautiful !!! - You have described it so competent. - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 6/18/2013 2:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Anne-Lise :)