Lost Tears

I follow my own footsteps I bring life to its knees I then cry, I cry over her I collect my tears in a vial I jump into the air, so free In my dream I can do all I dream of everything pure She comes to me in my dreams My heart leaps of burning fire I reach the edge of the sea And there go my tears, downward I drop the vial in the water I start to return back home She’s gone, I don’t know why I wander through the yard Not knowing what to do I fall to the ground, my knees weak But no tears do I shed now She never returns to me I walk aimlessly many nights A bitter taste of those tears Still wash into my mouth The sea harbors many tears How do I get mine back So she will return to me Dreams leaked into reality I falter, I miss my step I no longer can fly now And my tears have dried up But my pain is real within me Where has she gone from me Why did she leave my heart For I have immense love for her To share even without tears If the mistress of the night Could discover my agony Maybe she’ll bless my soul And I might find my tears again
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/30/2013 7:39:00 PM
This is marvelous. The thought that finding your tears will bring her back...gaah..so great and emotional, I love this poem! :) Always, Laura
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Date: 1/30/2013 5:59:00 PM
Hey Russell I really really like this one, this form suits you very well. Great Job.
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Date: 1/30/2013 2:45:00 PM
Sentimental..emotive and beautiful.Dreams usually follow realities as realities get lost in dreams.A great poem
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Date: 1/30/2013 10:30:00 AM
powerful write, my friend - I see you have a new contest - must check it out : )
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Date: 1/30/2013 3:56:00 AM
I hope just a work about lost love and not real life..Very expressive and emotive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:05:00 PM
If you lose your tears in the ocean, then they are gone permanently! Your tears would be like foul balls and home runs at the ballpark. Very descriptive write. Just one suggestion: at the end of the fifth line, convert "free" to "freely". You need an adverb there in lieu of an adjective.
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Date: 1/29/2013 9:41:00 PM
I enjoyed this peek into your work, Russell! The depth of emotion and your way of conveying that really are amazing! Great work.
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Date: 1/29/2013 7:49:00 PM
A pleasure to read your poems as always.
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Date: 1/29/2013 5:45:00 PM
Enjoyed your wonderful poem Russel, love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/29/2013 4:48:00 PM
Hoping those dreams work out! Deep deep wondering myself how its gonna work out. Great job
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