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Lost Soul Acrostic

Left behind without a friend. Only to have to face the end. So lonely here all by myself. The dust is thick up on the shelf. Severely damaged, alone and burned. On a journey where nothing's learned. Until the dusk swallow's me whole. Living my life while I lost my soul. For the acrostic contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 3:46:00 PM
nice wording here robert ,,, thank you for reading my E-Card poem ,,,, someone kept sending me an e-card with out any names ;}
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:53:00 PM
Idon't know what an acrostic is but makes no difference as the poem is what's important. Has a message that's all too common so there are many who will think it is written for them.
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Date: 8/12/2012 1:26:00 PM
Another win...WOW !! I'm afraid I resemble this one too...but you wrote it so well !! I've not tried an acrostic...will have to look up what that is....though reading yours I see a little. Congrats on your wins, my friend !! Hope you find a little joy out there too !!
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2012 9:03:00 PM
rj.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD
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Date: 8/9/2012 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! great ending :)
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Date: 8/8/2012 10:05:00 PM
Very nicely done, and sad. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/8/2012 7:13:00 PM
Oh how sad and well stated. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/8/2012 3:41:00 PM
CAn't believe I never saw it before. was it just barely posted? Way to go, Robert, on your win with this great acrostic poem!
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Date: 8/6/2012 10:00:00 AM
Robert an excellent entree, I like this a lot, good luck...David
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