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Lost Love

Deep in solitude I hope to reduce the magnitude Pain in my heart makes it protrude Of my so called dove That made an intrude I fell n love- Am sure it was a ditch Now I am in need of a severe stitch After this unpolite breach. I was torn apart With the hope to convert Eye saw she was the one But now she has won In causing me torment No option but to lament She moved on so quick I must be so dumb and thick Not to read between the lines Or see the changes in trend I always tried to ammend But everytime, the rules I bend. Deep in my soul I feel in need of an overhaul. To me I thought you'd stay But now you leave me to stray. I think about how you think Clearly so shallow After the things I swallow From your verbal vommit Yet to my heart I permit Anger, avoids to emmit But she claims I am wrong Yet daily I sing our song And hope the pain will not prolong. Juggled my emotions I am strangled in my devotion. I hope karma Will come- ah! And my tears Will turn to spears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/25/2016 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on your placement Teddy!
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:16:00 AM
Hi Teddy. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:17:00 AM
Wow a lovely poem teddy.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/23/2016 5:39:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:21:00 AM
Just wanted to thank you for entering my contest it was an honor reading:)
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win....
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Date: 9/29/2013 12:24:00 PM
Way to go, Teddy. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 9/28/2013 2:42:00 PM
Teddy, your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:32:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, teddy
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:50:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/22/2013 11:43:00 PM
this is so powerful and deep. Full of pain, sorrow, emotion, hurt and sorrow. The reader can feel what is in your heart. nice job
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Date: 9/15/2013 11:10:00 PM
Love oh Love, why do you hurt so bad! From hurt to the hurtful. Good emotion.
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:59:00 PM
Great song you sing my broder! Let's see more of those spears.
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