Lost Love

If only you could see I still have feelings for you No matter if I show it Or not I will always care I can't stand not being with you You act as though I'm not to Be seen as a person to be Trusted with everything I may have screwed up But life is full of screw ups I know I shouldn't have acted out of anger I shouldn't have but My life, my love, and My heart Belong to you. I might never get it back But it belongs to You. I love you

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/19/2013 8:16:00 PM

very nicely done,,,, I like the fact that you can still show someone you still care , especially when they act like you don't exist. Unless it's just here in cyber world and on your note pad

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2011 8:56:00 PM

wow! to your poem,, it s hard to show someone you still feel for them... especially when one acts like if they dont matter.. if i where you Keith, dont let that person go... you might lose them if you dont let them know what you are feeling... take it from me... i care and love some one,, but he,,, shows nothing... lol.. thats life.. later,, Linda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/9/2011 11:42:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Keith. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/7/2011 12:57:00 PM

effective thoughts on lost love, Keith