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Lost Love

Love is like an alarm clock
Just when you think all is set
she cheats and then wants to buzz 
Off goes the first ring  









For John Freemans competition Love or Humhour

Copyright © Deirdre Omaidin | Year Posted 2011

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/21/2011 1:35:00 PM LOL yes...true to form and I can picture/hear it put to music, if you'd like it could be entered in my contest too? We Aren't Japanese but please! Light & Love Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/17/2011 7:52:00 PM Cool one, Deirdre. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/17/2011 4:24:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Eiken Laan Date: 1/17/2011 1:59:00 PM Deirdre, this is great fun, well done and congrats on your win. I read your piece on the Tramore Tales poetry book, it is wonderful. My Gr. Grandfather on the paternal side was an RIC man based in Queen Street. Small world eh! Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 1/17/2011 11:02:00 AM Hello Deidre, Congratulations on your wonderful win here. Very witty and so well done. As Always, Shar Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 1/17/2011 10:55:00 AM great dodoitsu, congrats on your win in the contest Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/17/2011 8:43:00 AM Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Deirdre, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 1/17/2011 4:48:00 AM Hello Deirdre . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write.i think that this was a very clever bit of writing, associating clock and ring.I'd 'wring' her alright.Eamon Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 1/16/2011 8:56:00 PM This is really very clever and rates high with me. Congratulations, Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/16/2011 7:13:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win in John's contest, Dierdre! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/16/2011 5:53:00 PM Congrats Deirdre on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu.. enjoyed every line as u enjoy your top ten victory and success with luv.. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/16/2011 3:31:00 PM Yep that the way it goes sometimes Eeirdre, Congratulations on your worthy poem's 4th place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/16/2011 3:16:00 PM Very clever poem, Deirdre. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/16/2011 3:10:00 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Deirdre Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/16/2011 2:56:00 PM Congratulations on being selected in the contest. This is a good one. Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 1/16/2011 12:40:00 PM Very cute poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/15/2011 4:24:00 PM Nice metaphor of alarm clock for life, Good luck in the contest, Deirdre Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/15/2011 3:42:00 PM Deirdre, thank you for supporting my contests, it does not go unnoticed. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/15/2011 3:12:00 PM Good one...Sad but has some humor also..Good luck in the contest..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara Login to Reply