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Lost in time

An old lady
her heart yearning
for memories
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  1. Date: 5/9/2010 5:52:00 PM
    real nice work in this one Michelle. Reader's heart yearns for her. -Robert

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 10:33:00 AM
    Well done expressing the old lady's yearning in so few words....12 words, I counted lol. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 5:01:00 AM
    Very well written

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 3:44:00 AM
    I hope I never reach the point you vividly painted with so few words.

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 3:42:00 AM
    well done on pining the things older or others go threw, trped my their own lost memories,..p.d