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Lost in Goodbye

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Lost in Goodbye

8/11/12

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Lost in goodbye
The pathway ends in sick disgrace
No one to turn to
No one to face
Bitter emotions clear your way
Determination to destroy
Is only a heartfelt tear away
Lost in goodbye
The knife slits inside the skin of the broken
Ignored, forgotten
Nothing spoken
And the shedding of blood is evident here
Meddled, tattered
A whole life
Within a tear
Lost in goodbye. . .lost in goodbye
Always goodbye
The rest are all lies
Lies
The rest are all lies

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  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:30:00 PM
    I hope you never fall into a depressed state like the one you have described here. You have described it well.