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Lost in Cyberspace

That'll teach me
Or will it?
Penned a poem with the keyboard
Dumb move, 
I admit it.

You're not going to get me
I tapped back in
And my words 
Disappeared again
Oh, that's a sin.

Poor poet on line
Why dost thou insist
On leaving your pen behind
When you know 
It is a risk?

They were tapping back at me
As if they knew the rules
And then
I hit that key
And finally lost my cool.

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  1. Date: 8/16/2009 7:50:00 AM
    This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 1:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 5:05:00 AM
    Karen - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 4:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Karen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2009 1:15:00 PM
    Karen, Congratulations! Very well penned. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/9/2009 12:58:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured, Karen. Make a back up WHILE composing. Save often. Use microsoft word or something. Then, you can keep your cool...Been there... sadly. Keep writing! DAS-J

  1. Date: 8/9/2009 12:36:00 PM
    Interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 12:42:00 AM
    It's happened to me several times...Raul

  1. Date: 2/9/2009 3:07:00 PM
    Never been very successful without rewrites myself ... LOL ... enjoyed this one, Karen!!

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 2:52:00 PM
    You paint pictures in my mind and no longer fear the pen that is my sword.Blessed be. Bellantony

  1. Date: 9/14/2008 11:07:00 AM
    it's a sin against the pen. don't do it again! john