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Lost Fate

‘Twas once our hearts upon love’s parchment danced,   in jubilee and joy our voices rang;   with tenderness and love, how we romanced,   and every song that could be sung ~ we sang.   On flagrant wings your poems all soared away   to others’ hearts ... whomever they may be,   and onward rushes life in disarray,   with promise drowning in some heartless sea.   O' memories, embrace me one last time,   in comfort for lost years we shan't reclaim;   but, shed no tears to recompensing rhyme,   nor lack of knowing who or what to blame. ‘Tis destiny unlocks life’s waiting gate;   in truth, tho ... without You, I have no fate. Rascal 2012

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Date: 3/20/2012 9:04:00 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Rascal. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/20/2012 10:22:00 AM
Such a warm and encouraging review, Carol, I feel like warming the old pen right now...smile! Thank you most delightfully for the encouraging words and for your "love"...I can never receive enough of that! Rsacal
Date: 3/19/2012 6:01:00 PM
Thank you ever-so warmly and appreciatively, Laura, for your lovely praise – my rusty old pen certainly can use the inspiration...smile! Rascal
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Date: 3/19/2012 5:51:00 PM
Such a sweet poem! Very nice! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/23/2012 8:14:00 AM
And, such a sweet comment from an obviously sweet poetess, Laura...smiles 'n hugs of thanks! Rascal
Date: 3/19/2012 8:30:00 AM
well written poetic work!! GREat! Rascal you are very talented! I am glad to have stopped by and read you today!
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Date: 3/19/2012 8:45:00 AM
Doris, you've made my day with all your praise and appreciation. I am glad you stopped by, too. Thank you warmly! Rascal

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