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Lost Cub

A lioness calls out as she walked slowly towards her cub Who lay silently behind the shrub But her calls went unanswered, there was no reply By the fangs of a viper the poor cub had died The mother licked her cub hoping it would move But the stillness of death could not be removed She called..... and she called...... until the sun set The grief of that lioness was hard to forget After a while the big cat reluctantly moved on But she looked back one last time, and then she was gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/11/2013 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Joseph
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Date: 11/10/2013 9:28:00 PM
Joseph... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:07:00 PM
I LOVE how you did the theme of grief. An animal's grief. I think we can never really know how deep their grief may be. but surely it is a grief of some kind!!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/28/2013 7:59:00 PM
thank you Andrea...I think Susan wanted personal accounts ...so this doesn't qualify
Date: 9/22/2013 1:03:00 PM
Such a sad poem, but so well written. The image of the mother cat looking back is haunting.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/23/2013 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Monterey

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