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Loss

The craving of the heart Intensified by the start Of the wheel of life Filled with endless strife. The mind mutters words Double edged swords Cutting through the shell Leaving an immortal yell. Pain, it filters through Like the light chill of dew Down my veins it goes Till the tip of my toes. The world is forlorn The road is still long Loss seems unending The wounds unmending.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/27/2012 11:40:00 PM
thoughts of a lonely and depressed girl .jk
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Date: 6/16/2012 12:16:00 PM
Very good poem!Welcome to the Poetysoup.The form here is Rhyme I think.
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:24:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 6/5/2012 3:03:00 PM
Enjoyed your write here..keep writing!! regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:56:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Gopika. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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