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Looking upward '82

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Looking upward '82

                                      I remembered a time in spring
                                         when I glazed upward,
                                      the clouds taking shapes of
                                           trains, elephants, lions and cars.
                                       I could spend hours playing my

                                       Now, when I look up,
                                          those shapes are gone.
                                       In their place, words like cumulus,
                                           cirrus, stratus and cumulonimbus
                                        Somehow I like the old games better.

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  1. Date: 4/6/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Enjoyed your profundity of reflection.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 8:07:00 AM
    It's never too late to play those games - love watching clouds. Great piece.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 6:44:00 AM
    Fantastic writing>patrick

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 2:14:00 PM
    Good write. I too am a child at heart and like the old games. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 11:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tucker. Love, Carol