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Looked Over Zone

Ah, the friend zone
An electric fence of limits
A barrier between eternal happiness
And an awkward end to friendship

The excitement in your voice
As her name spills over thy lips
Making my abdomen squelch
While I smile and nod carefully

Replaying every word, look, and deed
She's spoken to you these days before
Dates planned, events all set
I feel envy showering out my veins

Sometimes I wish I got the courage
To tell you how I felt everyday
But when you told me you loved her
I knew quiet I had to stay

A wedding destined for royalty
As we walk down the aisle
Step by step I lead the way
With the bride but a movement behind

Clothed in a title, Maid of Honor
Tears fall slowly drip by drip
Everyone gazes at the love between the couple
Why can't I feel happy too?

The only one to stir my heart
Betrothed to another
Looked over zone
With a secret crush

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  1. Date: 6/17/2012 11:28:00 AM
    this reminds me of the poem I wrote Middle Ground. Good write, I like it - JH

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 5:44:00 AM
    wow sad sad sad sad i been through heart aches but this is hard to swallow lol 7 up :U

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 7:37:00 AM
    nice write,thats how life is,we win some.we lose some

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 6:39:00 AM
    A very emotional write here Jessica..And I agree with Diane on this one..excellent write!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:09:00 AM
    aww bles you that is well written, it is hard when we like some one and we just know they dont feel the same way, it happened to me but my friend did not get married and they talking to me again now and are friends and some day I still hope God will have his way in our lives, he didnt bring me and my friend back to the same place for no reason LOL, if it is Gods will then it shall be, there is hope always hope., I have a crush on this guy and have done for 18 months