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Looked Over Zone

Ah, the friend zone An electric fence of limits A barrier between eternal happiness And an awkward end to friendship The excitement in your voice As her name spills over thy lips Making my abdomen squelch While I smile and nod carefully Replaying every word, look, and deed She's spoken to you these days before Dates planned, events all set I feel envy showering out my veins Sometimes I wish I got the courage To tell you how I felt everyday But when you told me you loved her I knew quiet I had to stay A wedding destined for royalty As we walk down the aisle Step by step I lead the way With the bride but a movement behind Clothed in a title, Maid of Honor Tears fall slowly drip by drip Everyone gazes at the love between the couple Why can't I feel happy too? The only one to stir my heart Betrothed to another Looked over zone With a secret crush

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/17/2012 11:28:00 AM
this reminds me of the poem I wrote Middle Ground. Good write, I like it - JH
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Date: 6/17/2012 5:44:00 AM
wow sad sad sad sad i been through heart aches but this is hard to swallow lol 7 up :U
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Date: 6/2/2012 7:37:00 AM
nice write,thats how life is,we win some.we lose some
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Date: 6/2/2012 6:39:00 AM
A very emotional write here Jessica..And I agree with Diane on this one..excellent write!
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:09:00 AM
aww bles you that is well written, it is hard when we like some one and we just know they dont feel the same way, it happened to me but my friend did not get married and they talking to me again now and are friends and some day I still hope God will have his way in our lives, he didnt bring me and my friend back to the same place for no reason LOL, if it is Gods will then it shall be, there is hope always hope., I have a crush on this guy and have done for 18 months
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