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Lonely Weather

Thought that I knew you so well my heart thought that she knew you even better like a change of season you’ve moved on twilight comes and lovers go each brings a change of heartbeats and it looks like I’m in for lonely weather If I thought you would stay perhaps I would promise to love you more but it was not me who turned and it is you walking away with my heartbeat so now you’ve decided to move on not a real word not even a truthful reason given I guess reality is coming through now that your invisible I can finally see the true colors of you Fifteen seconds counted out one second at a time may be all that I can handle for a long long time I went to my knees for you…only you and you still walked away could you not feel could you not hear that I’m now silent and been broken but these tears are not about you it is about my lost trust in me Knowing now that every heartbeat takes me one breath farther from you I will pull through for I’m a survivor time may never erase the empty shadow left in my heart because of you I want you to know …. I need you to know that I don’t do well in lonely weather Irish Dedicated to CD on her rainy day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2010 3:14:00 PM
Oh, boy! Can I relate to that! Very well written indeed and yes, you will pull through. I have too. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem and on soupmail. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/29/2010 10:56:00 PM
you seem to be very caring of others emotions. thats very hard to find in people in this world. i enjoyed this poem, being strong and knowing that this other person was wrong. and not right for you instead of denial is a great thing. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/29/2010 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart through poetry with us Michael. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2010 7:07:00 PM
You seem to know just what has been in my heart, Michael, and we have just recently met here. Guess I needn't say that this poem "speaks" to me in a special way. You have amazing talent as well as an insight into people's feelings. This will be a favorite for me! Love, Carolyn
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