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Lonely Tear

Glistening symbol of my pain this lonely tear. You wet my cheek. As a smile I try to feign, unable now of joy to speak. This lonely tear you wet my cheek hinting at things not shared. Unable now of joy to speak; feeling so lost and scared. Hinting at things not shared into the shadows I fear, I've tumbled feeling so lost and scared. My pain you make me ache and stumble. Into the shadows I fear I've tumbled, and all I see is black. My pain you make me ache, and stumble as strength I seem to lack. And all I see is black. By this grief I have been swallowed. As strength I seem to lack, and by rain forever followed. By this grief I have been swallowed, as a smile I try to feign. And by rain forever followed, glistening, symbol of my pain. For Paula Swanson contest 'Pantoum' 3rd place

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Date: 1/4/2012 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Emma
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Date: 8/18/2011 11:12:00 AM
Hi Emma, enjoyed this clever verse, I don't know how you do it but the verse weaves together beautifully with your fascinating repetitions.
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:15:00 PM
You did a really great job with this wonderful write attached to a task of a form. I've done this form a couple of times and it can be difficult with the alternating scheme of refrains. So smile with your victory as you have captured the essence of this form!
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Date: 7/28/2011 3:29:00 PM
Wow! ...very nice..congrats on your big win...I can relate to this one. BG
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Date: 7/28/2011 2:09:00 AM
This one goes to my fav's. Incredible, deep, profound Pantoum, Emma. Lainie
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Date: 7/27/2011 4:27:00 PM
Congrats Emma on an elegant third place win in Pantoum with this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:33:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Emma : )
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:16:00 PM
hey Em, congrats on a great win. David
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:53:00 AM
spellbinding, emma...applause to you for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:30:00 PM
Emma, this is really GOOD. Sad message, heart ripping stuff and so earnest and rich with image. I especially like "rain forever followed." Winning entry for sure. :-) Good luck from Cyndi
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:19:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Emma. Thank you for sharing and I will be back again soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 7:56:00 AM
The last line nicely encapsulates as well as sums up the poem. Enjoyed your creative verse!
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Emma Mantle
Date: 7/13/2011 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Stephen. Appreciate you stopping by. :)

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